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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. KwymL

The two maps show the layout of an island before and after certain infrastructural developments. In all, now, the island is oriented towards accepting tourists and accommodating their interests within itself. The developments include a footpath and a vehicle track. Moreover, a restaurant, a reception area, and a newly built pier along with several cottages have been built on the island. Before these improvements, the island was untouched by humans. It had scattered vegetation around it, mostly consisting of coconut trees along the shoreline. A cliff surrounded majority of the island, however, a beach was also present on the tapered end of the island. Later, with the inclusion of man-made structures, the island was made more inhabitable. Now, the island has a pier to dock sailboats, which further leads to the main reception. Down the road, one may find the restaurant. Few cottages lay astride the road, built to accommodate tourists. Finally, the beach is now tourist-friendly and has a dedicated swimming area. It is also notable that the built-up around the island has not harmed the local vegetation.

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now
 tourist-friendly and has a dedicated swimming area. It is also
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island
 has not harmed the local vegetation. 