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The information regarding the six Gulf nation where the estimated of the production of oil from 1990 to 2010 has illustrated in the graph.

The information regarding the six Gulf nation where the estimated of the production of oil from 1990 to 2010 has illustrated in the graph. XGlQw
The information regarding the six Gulf nation where the estimated of the production of oil from 1990 to 2010 has illustrated in the graph. Overall, the least production of oil was in Qatar, while the highest was in Saudi Arabia. All nations were minimum  increased in production of oil in the given period expect Qatar. In details, it was estimate that in 1990 Iran produced near 3 million barrel of oil per day but it increased to 4, 000, 000 after 10 years and share the same number until 2005, whilst the production of oil was little rise in 2010 that was above 4 million. In Iraq and Kuwait share the same platform in the production of oil and had a negligible difference between them in 1990 and 2010 which was two and 4 million respectively. Moreover, least while was produced by Qatar as compare to other nations while, in Saudi Arabia production of oil was at a peak in 1990 it was at 8 million and in 2010 it reached at peak 14 million. UAE was similar in production of oil in all years that figure was above 2 million And in 2005 and 2010 it was accounted for 4 million each.
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was in Qatar, while the highest was in Saudi Arabia. All nations were minimum
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, it was estimate that in 1990 Iran produced near 3
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it increased to 4, 000, 000 after 10 years and share the same number until 2005, whilst the
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. In Iraq and Kuwait share the same platform in the
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was at a peak in 1990 it was at 8
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and in 2010 it reached at peak 14
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. UAE was similar in
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IELTS academic The information regarding the six Gulf nation where the estimated of the production of oil from 1990 to 2010 has illustrated in the graph.

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