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The rendered bar chart illustrate the larnees involvement in three sports in a academic based on which grades they are studying in. The data has been calibrated in percents

The rendered bar chart illustrate the larnees involvement in three sports in a academic based on which grades they are studying in. The data has been calibrated in percents D2e36
It can be seen clearly that, the lerneers of class viii love to play cricket in half -fifth. Whereas, the proportion of cricket love to play by class ix that is 45%. However, 25 percent students love to play soccer in the following class that is five percentile higher than class viii. After that, 25 percent larnees interested to play basketball in ix class. The ratio of basketball five percent higher then class viii.
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basketball in ix
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IELTS academic The rendered bar chart illustrate the larnees involvement in three sports in a academic based on which grades they are studying in. The data has been calibrated in percents

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