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The two maps below illustrate the changes in a bookstore since 2000.

The two maps below illustrate the changes in a bookstore since 2000. 96Agn
Overall, it is clear that bookstore has shown a significant development in its design, especially left-side of the bookstore has been modified and some places in the center have been added. The territory of non-fiction has been replaced with a new café and non-fiction has been added on the upper side of the left corner where formerly fiction books were located. One more visible change is that the area of fiction has been reduced in size to provide space for art, hobbies and cookery which were located in the center of bookshop and the space of them is now occupied by tables. However, the other facilities either remain unchanged. Service desk, travel books and new books still remain in the bookstore. The bridge over the river to the north of the town still stands. Another surviving facility is the post office, which is situated by the main road. As for the primary school, it has been made bigger with the addition of two new buildings in order to provide schooling for the growing number of children.
Overall
, it is
clear
that bookstore has shown a significant development in its design,
especially
left
-side of the bookstore has
been modified
and
some
places in the center have been
added
.

The territory of non-fiction has
been replaced
with a new café and non-fiction has been
added
on the upper side of the
left
corner where
formerly
fiction books
were located
. One more visible
change
is that the area of fiction has been
reduced
in size to provide space for art, hobbies and cookery which
were located
in the center of bookshop and the space of them is
now
occupied by tables.

However
, the other facilities either remain unchanged. Service desk, travel books and new books
still
remain in the bookstore.

The bridge over the river to the north of the town
still
stands. Another surviving facility is the post office, which
is situated
by the main road. As for the primary school, it has
been made
bigger with the addition of two new buildings in order to provide schooling for the growing number of children.
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IELTS academic The two maps below illustrate the changes in a bookstore since 2000.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
7.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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