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The two maps below illustrate the changes in a bookstore since 2000.

The two maps below illustrate the changes in a bookstore since 2000. 96Agn

Overall, it is clear that bookstore has shown a significant development in its design, especially left-side of the bookstore has been modified and some places in the center have been added. The territory of non-fiction has been replaced with a new café and non-fiction has been added on the upper side of the left corner where formerly fiction books were located. One more visible change is that the area of fiction has been reduced in size to provide space for art, hobbies and cookery which were located in the center of bookshop and the space of them is now occupied by tables. However, the other facilities either remain unchanged. Service desk, travel books and new books still remain in the bookstore. The bridge over the river to the north of the town still stands. Another surviving facility is the post office, which is situated by the main road. As for the primary school, it has been made bigger with the addition of two new buildings in order to provide schooling for the growing number of children.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that bookstore has shown a significant development in its design, especially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-side of the bookstore has been modified
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places in the center have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
.

The territory of non-fiction has been replaced
 with a new café and non-fiction has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 on the upper side of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner where formerly
 fiction books were located
. One more visible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that the area of fiction has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in size to provide space for art, hobbies and cookery which were located
 in the center of bookshop and the space of them is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 occupied by tables.

However
, the other facilities either remain unchanged. Service desk, travel books and new books still
 remain in the bookstore.

The bridge over the river to the north of the town still
 stands. Another surviving facility is the post office, which is situated
 by the main road. As for the primary school, it has been made
 bigger with the addition of two new buildings in order to provide schooling for the growing number of children. 