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The charts illustrate the proportion of people who had proprietorship in electrical equipment and how many hours people used them per week during the 99-year period since 1920.

The charts illustrate the proportion of people who had proprietorship in electrical equipment and how many hours people used them per week during the 99-year period since 1920. LLQnn

The charts illustrate the proportion of people who had proprietorship in electrical equipment and how many hours people used them per week during the 99-year period since 1920. It can be seen that electric devices for houseworks were used with the significantly increased number in the period and people reduced a lot of time which was spent for the household. Regarding electrical tools, the figure of people using three pieces of equipment increased. Particularly, in 1920, cool and freeze tools accounted for 2% of equipment which people used, that number was as less as one fifth times than the vacuum cleaner and one twentieth than the dishwasher. In contrast, in 1960, the number of refrigerators had increased sharply and surpassed the remaining 2 appliances with 20% more than, at 90%. After that, the percentage of people using the fridge and vacuum cleaner had been increasing and achieved the top at 100% in 1980 and 2000, respectively. The proportion of houseworks with washing machines declined slightly from 1960 to 1980 and then took the top at 75% in 2019. From 1920 to 1960, the time people spent doing houseworks decreased dramatically, from 50 hours to 20 hours per week. Then, that number continued to reduce with the slight level and took the bottom of 11 hours in 2019.

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