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The two maps below depict changes in a town over time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The supplied maps provide information on the developments that have taken place in some town during a period of 26 years, namely between 1995 and today. Overall, it is clearly perceptible that the town has been modernized amid the period. There are new facilities for visitors and their cars. One interesting change is that the farmland that used to be in the north-eastern part of the town has been changed into a golf field with two tennis courts at the bottom. The hotel situated near the main intersection of the town has gained a parking lot for the guests. The forest park used to be located between the farmland and hotel has been cut down. The fish market has been modernized into apartments and the shop that was located in 1995 by the main road has been altered into a restaurant. The fishing port on the sea has been knocked down. Regarding the facilities that did not change during the whole period the most noticeable one is a housing development. However, there is a new street with two additional buildings. The other place that remained the same is the café located on the beach

The supplied maps provide information on the developments that have taken place in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 during a period of 26 years, namely
 between 1995 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Overall
, it is clearly
 perceptible that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 has been modernized
 amid the period. There are new facilities for visitors and their cars.

One interesting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is that the farmland that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be in the north-eastern part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a golf field with two tennis courts at the bottom. The hotel situated near the main intersection of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 has gained a parking lot for the guests. The forest park This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be located
 between the farmland and hotel has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 fish market has been modernized
 into apartments and the shop that was The usual preposition for an exact address is "at" not "on". Did you mean "located at 1995 By the main Road"?located at 1995 By the main Road
located in 1995 by the main road
 has been altered
 into a restaurant. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 fishing port on the sea has been knocked
 down.

Regarding the facilities that did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 during the whole period the most noticeable one is a housing development. However
, there is a new street with two additional buildings. The other place that remained the same is the café located on the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphbeach.beach!beach?beach:beach,beach;
beach