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The given two maps illustrate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The given two maps illustrate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010. g5yOd
The given two maps illustrate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that the road access to the city hospital had been upgraded in 2010 with the addition of a bus station, two roundabouts and a separate public car park. In 2007, the hospital road, which had three bus stops on the either side, was connected to the city road and to the ring road. Furthermore, a common car park was located on the east side of the hospital road, and it served both public and staff members. In 2010, some significant changes could be seen. Firstly, the common car park was assigned exclusively for the hospital staff, while a novel public car park was established on the east side of the hospital. Secondly, two roundabouts had been constructed at both ends of the hospital road; one at the intersection with the ring road and other at the city road junction. Finally, the three bus stops on either side had been removed, and a new bus station was constructed on the west side of the hospital road with connections to the both newly built roundabouts.
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two maps illustrate the
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road
network around a City
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Hospital
in 2007 and in 2010.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the
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road
access to the city
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hospital
had
been upgraded
in 2010 with the addition of a bus station, two roundabouts and a separate public
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car
park.

In 2007, the
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hospital
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road
, which had three bus
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stops
on the either side,
was connected
to the city
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road
and to the ring
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road
.
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, a common
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car
park
was located
on the east side of the
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hospital
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road
, and it served both public and staff members. In 2010,
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some
significant
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changes
could be
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seen
.
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, the common
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car
park
was assigned
exclusively for the
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hospital
staff, while a novel public
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car
park
was established
on the east side of the
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hospital
.
Secondly
, two roundabouts had
been constructed
at both ends of the
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hospital
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road
; one at the intersection with the ring
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road
and other at the city
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junction.
Finally
, the three bus
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stops
on either side had
been removed
, and a new bus station
was constructed
on the west side of the
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hospital
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road
with connections to the both
newly
built roundabouts.
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IELTS academic The given two maps illustrate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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