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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. lj8KX

The diagrams illustrate the involving equipment and procedure in cement production, and how concrete is produced with cement and other ingredients to be used in building activities. Overall, there are five stages in process of cement production and one step in concrete-making. Although crushing, mixing, and heating are needed for the former, there is just one required stage (blending) in the latter. To begin with, limestone and clay are the raw materials needed to produce cement. At first, those are crushed to powder by a rolling crusher. Then, this powder blended with a mixer following by the heating process via a rotating heater. Finally, dipped on a grinder cement is ready to packed into bags and be used in different purposes. Moving to the next graph, we can see the procedure of concrete production, which cement, water, sand, and gravel are the four necessary ingredients. About half of concrete is made of gravel while Sand, cement, and water respectively by 25%, 15%, and 10% are the remaining proportions.

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, water, sand, and gravel are the four necessary ingredients. About half of concrete is made
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cement
, and water respectively
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