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The amount of Consumption of spreads

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The line graph Compares the amount of Consumption of Spreads From 1981 to 2007. It is notable that in 1981 people started to use 2 types of Spread, butter, and margatine. In 1986 the amount of consumed butter reached the highest rate, . This is accounted 160 grams, exhibiting a higher rate than all the other categories provided. This significant increase means that the consumption of butter rose dramatically in that period.
The line graph Compares the amount of Consumption of Spreads From 1981 to 2007. It is notable that in 1981
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IELTS academic The amount of Consumption of spreads

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