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Grange park map in 1920 and now

Grange park map in 1920 and now Q55XP
The given stracture of public park in 1920 and now. It shows the various changes made in Greange park. There is a drastic change in 1920 Grange park and now, except rose garden in north west side and north and south side entrance. In 1920 there was change and construct amphil hall for concerts, in 1920 there was a middle of park fountain that now change to rose garden and all four side of garden there is seats insted of glass house change to water feature. In 1920 north east side rose garden and pound for water plants was there but today insted of rose garden there is cafe constructed and in place of pounf for water plant, now its children's play area. There is one new thing added out side of Greage park is entrance of underground carpark. All in all this Greance park in 1920 was more specias then today but its amenities are more then 1920.
The
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stracture
of public
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park
in 1920 and
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now
. It
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shows
the various
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changes
made in
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Greange
park.

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change
in 1920 Grange
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park
and
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now
, except
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rose
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garden
in
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north west
side and north and south side entrance. In 1920 there was
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change
and construct
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amphil
hall for concerts, in 1920 there was a middle of
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park
fountain that
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now
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change
to
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rose
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garden
and all four side of
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garden
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there is seats
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insted
of glass
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house
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change
to water feature.

In 1920
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north east
side
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rose
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garden
and pound for water plants was there
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but
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today
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insted
of
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rose
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garden
there is
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cafe
constructed and in place of
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pounf
for water plant,
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now
its children's play area. There is one new thing
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added
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out side
of
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Greage
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park
is entrance of underground
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carpark
.

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Greance
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park
in 1920 was more
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specias
then
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today
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but
its amenities are more
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then
1920.
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IELTS academic Grange park map in 1920 and now

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