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The graph below shows thw total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of six countries in 1980,1990,2000.

The graph below shows thw total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of six countries in 1980, 1990, 2000. Q5531
The given tables chart provides data about the amount of products of waste in rural and urban areas of six nations in the given time period of 1980, 1990 and 2000. Overall, it is evident that the U. S. A produce large amount of waste as compared to other nations in all the given time period. Having a quick glance on the chart, it is crystal clear that in the 1980, the 141 million tonnes waste produced by U. S. A, which was followed by Ireland (20). The Poland produce 9 million waste and Portugal produce 2 million tonnes but the only 0. 6 million waste is produced by Japan. Probing further. In the 1990, the U. S. A produce 213 million tonnes of waste and the 41 million tonnes waste was produced by Ireland. Which was minor difference in korea as 31. The 10 million tonnes waste is manufactured by Poland and the only 3 million tonnes waste was produced by Portugal. Moving ahead, In the year of 2000, the U. S. A create 256 million tonnes waste and it was followed by Ireland (52). The 19 million waste was producing in Korea. The minkr difference was noticed in Poland, Portugal, and Japam, in production of waste. It was 9. 9, 5 and 3 million tonnes individually.
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in rural and urban areas of six nations in the
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time period of 1980, 1990 and 2000.
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that in the 1980, the 141
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by U. S. A, which
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9
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and Portugal
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0. 6
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is
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213
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and the 41
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was producing in Korea. The
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, in production of
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IELTS academic The graph below shows thw total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of six countries in 1980, 1990, 2000.

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