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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. OoxN

The line graph depicts information on manufacturing and demand for steel and the number of workers in the industry in the UK in the year 2010. Overall, considering its demand, the amount of metal manufactured gone through some fluctuations and showed a downward trend at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the actual demand had similar up and downs and increased at the end of the period exceeding the amount of production. In contrast, the number of workers declined gradually. To begin with, the production amount increased to peak at 5000million tons and reduced to 1000million tons in April. it maintained a plateau April to august and after some inclination, it declined to less than 1000million tons in December. On the other hand, the demand had a spike to 3000milloin tons which again fall to less than 2000milliontons in about may and steadily decrease and had soar at the end of the year. It is worth noticing that, thein January the number of employees rose to 6000milliomntons and dramatically declined to3000milliontons in before April. After fluctuations, there was a steep decrease in December.

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 for steel and the number of workers in the industry in the UK in the year 2010.

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