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The two graphs show information about the imports of New Zealandч from Australia and Japan over a decade from 1994 to 2004.

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The two graphs show information about the imports of New Zealandч from Australia and Japan over a decade from 1994 to 2004. Overall, there was significant upward in the bring in of New Zealand from Australia, while the import of the New Zealand from the Japan fluctuated and fell down. Regarding the import from Australia, it commenced at $4000mln in 1994, followed by slight escolation between 1994 and 1995. Then the figure inflated to 6 million dollars in 1996. Another point is that the import considerably fell down between 1996 and 1999. After this the import fluctuated and rose up. There was then a gradual rise to around $8000mln in 2004’ Afterwards look at the import of the New Zealand from Japan, it starts from $3000mln in 1994, then the import fluctuated between 1994 and 2001, after that there was gradually decrease over a three-year period between 2001 and 2004. Finally, the import amount of the New Zealand from Japan was about $2000mln in 2004.
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from Australia and
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over a decade from 1994 to 2004.

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fluctuated and fell down.

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from Australia, it commenced at $4000mln in 1994, followed by slight
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between 1994 and 1995. Then the figure inflated to 6 million dollars in 1996. Another point is that the
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fell down between 1996 and 1999. After this the
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fluctuated and rose up. There was then a gradual rise to around $8000mln in 2004’

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from $3000mln in 1994, then the
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fluctuated between 1994 and 2001, after that there was
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was about $2000mln in 2004.
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IELTS academic The two graphs show information about the imports of New Zealandч from Australia and Japan over a decade from 1994 to 2004.

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