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The two graph show the main source of in use from1980 to 1990.

The two graph show the main source of in use from1980 to 1990. R5qRW
The graph describe to the sources of energy in the use from 1980 to 1980s. The both graph show that oil was the major energy source in the USA in both 1980s to 1990s and second number was natural gas and then after remained coal energy source at third number. other hand we can see lowest energy source was natural power. it was dramatic rise in use from 5% to 10%. oil supplied the largest persentage of energy although the percentage decriced from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990. coal was proportional to 27 % to 22% in the previous decade. in that only hydrolik power was reminded at 1989 to 1999 5 %. The chart summerrise to the all energy was changed, in but ony one remain.
The graph
describe
to the
sources
of
energy
in the
use
from 1980 to 1980s. The both graph
show
that oil was the major
energy
source
in the USA in both 1980s to 1990s and second number was natural gas and then after remained coal
energy
source
at third number.
other
hand we can
see
lowest
energy
source
was natural power.
it
was dramatic rise in
use
from 5% to 10%.
oil
supplied the largest
persentage
of
energy
although the percentage
decriced
from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990.
coal
was proportional to 27 % to 22% in the previous decade.
in
that
only
hydrolik
power
was reminded
at 1989 to 1999 5 %. The chart
summerrise
to the all
energy
was
changed
, in
but
ony
one remain.
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IELTS academic The two graph show the main source of in use from1980 to 1990.

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