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the graph below shows the online sales of electronic gadgets in the first quarter of 2019.summrize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

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IELTS academic the graph below shows the online sales of electronic gadgets in the first quarter of 2019. summrize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

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