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The given pie charts give data about the electronic instruments that young people prefer to use for watching TV in 2009 and 2019.

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The given pie charts give data about the electronic instruments that young people prefer to use for watching TV in 2009 and 2019. Overall, watching TV from big devices such as conventional TV, Desktop Computer or Laptop became less popular in a decade, whilst the popularity of small devices grew up significantly. It is interesting to see that conventional TV, which accounted for 34% of popularity in 2009, had dramatically declined to only 4% in ten years. Usage of laptop and Desktop Computer fell slightly from 20% to 12% and from 18% to 12% respectively. A further point of interest is that flat-screen TV prefered by only 8% became the most popular segment in 2019 with a 27% rating, which had grown more than three times. Additionally, the next most popular device among the young age group was a mobile phone, which accounted for 15% and had risen from 11 percent to 26%. The tablet had become in the 2019 third most convenient device, which numbers grew up from 5% to 19%.

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