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The two diagrams illustrate the same school while the first one is before and the second one is after the construction of some facilities.

The two diagrams illustrate the same school while the first one is before and the second one is after the construction of some facilities. NmPjW

The two diagrams illustrate the same school while the first one is before and the second one is after the construction of some facilities. Looking first at the one before the construction, the school was no many buildings and there was only one car park. Additionally, the walking path connected to the school building. Moving on to the second map, in 2010, it can be seen that there are many buildings in the school. There were three buildings in the west north of the sports field. However, the walking path that used to be connected to the old school building was disappeared, instead of three walking paths connected to the three new school building in each other.

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before
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some
 facilities. Looking first
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many
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buildings
 and there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one car park. Additionally
, the walking path connected to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
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 building.

Moving on to the second map, in 2010, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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buildings
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school
. There were three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 in the west north of the sports field. However
, the walking path that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be connected
 to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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school
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building
was disappeared
, instead
 of three walking paths connected to the three new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
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building
 in each other. 