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The two charts describe the number of people who lived in two regions of Great Britain (England and Wales) from 1700 to 2000, and also include the birth and death stat throughout period.

The two charts describe the number of people who lived in two regions of Great Britain (England and Wales) from 1700 to 2000, and also include the birth and death stat throughout period. 1nmBA
The two charts describe the number of people who lived in two regions of Great Britain (England and Wales) from 1700 to 2000, and also include the birth and death stat throughout period. Overall, the population of England and Wales rose sharply every century. The birth and death rate was inconsistent in different periods, however the childbirth ratio was always higher than the dead’s. It can be clearly seen that a hundred year after 1700, the number of people doubled, from 5 millions to slightly more than 10 millions. Then there were roughly 15 millions added every next century, which made the figure of 2000 was around 40 millions. Even though the population rose century after century, the birth and death rate altered unstably. There were around 30000 babies that were given birth annually in 1700, and 25000 people were passed away. The gap between the number of birth and dead was consistent for the next two hundred years, with the figures of dead people were slightly more than 30000 and around 20000, respectively. Finally, in 1900 and 2000, the birth ratio stayed the same, which was 25000, meanwhile those, who were gone, decreased suddenly to lower than 10000 in the beginning of 21st century.
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every century. The
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birth
and death rate was inconsistent in
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periods,
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the childbirth ratio was always higher than the dead’s.

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that a hundred year after 1700, the number of
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doubled, from 5 millions to
slightly
more than 10 millions. Then there were roughly 15 millions
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added
every
next
century, which made the figure of 2000 was around 40 millions.

Even though
the population rose century after century, the
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birth
and death rate altered
unstably
. There were around 30000 babies that were
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birth
annually
in 1700, and 25000
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people
were passed
away. The gap between the number of
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birth
and dead was consistent for the
next
two hundred years, with the figures of dead
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people
were
slightly
more than 30000 and around 20000,
respectively
.
Finally
, in 1900 and 2000, the
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birth
ratio stayed the same, which was 25000, meanwhile those, who
were gone
, decreased
suddenly
to lower than 10000 in the beginning of 21st century.
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