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Time spent on leisure and household chores by Britain residents

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The chart and table detect the time spent by a resident of Britain on leisure and household chores. Overall it can be seen that men spend more time on leisure activity while women spend more time on cooking and washingOn average mens spent 137 minutes per day watching TV and videos and listening to Radio whereas the women spent 118 minutes on the same. Time spent on reading and sports by Mel was 18 and 15 minutes per day respectively female spend only 19 minutes per day on reading and 11 minutes per day on sportAccording to the chart women spend about 75 minutes per day on cooking and washing which is highest among other category the main spent nearly less than half time on the same only 35 minutes per day and 25 minutes per day has meant by female and male on shopping on clothing washing and ironing female span 30 minutes for day and mail spend about 10 minutes per day female spend least time only 9 minutes per dayhowever male spent 19 minutes per day on repair
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by a resident of Britain on leisure and household chores.
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on leisure activity while women
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137 minutes per day watching TV and videos and listening to Radio whereas the women
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118 minutes on the same.
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on reading and sports by Mel was 18 and 15 minutes per day
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about 75 minutes per day on cooking and washing which is highest among other category the main
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IELTS academic Time spent on leisure and household chores by Britain residents

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