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The chart shows the number of minutes of telephone calls in UK divided into three categories

The chart shows the number of minutes of telephone calls in UK divided into three categories EN9WB

The bar chart illustrates the amount of minutes of phone calls in the United Kingdom related to local, national and international and mobile roaming. The data is calibrated in billions. Overall, it can be clearly seen that local Lane was at the topmost position where as national and international and as well as mobiles followed the identical trend throughout the years. To begin with, the local-fixed line was recorded as 70 billion minutes in the year 1995, although it followed the rising trend and reached its peak in 1999 accounted as 90 Billion minutes form the graph went down slightly and reduced by 30 billion minutes and recorded as 70 in 2002. Probing further, domestic and foreign mobiles including all call had similar development from the year 1995 to 2002, while there was a difference of nearly 40 billion initially, the figure of national and international line went up gradually, nevertheless the calls from mobile had risen up rapidly. Therefore the variance among both the line reduced to 50 million units in the year 2002.

The bar chart illustrates the amount of minutes of phone calls in the United Kingdom related to local, national and international and mobile roaming. The data is calibrated
 in billions.

Overall
, it can be clearly
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seen
 that local Lane was at the topmost position Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 national and international and as well
 as mobiles followed the identical trend throughout the years.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the local-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 line was recorded
 as 70 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
 minutes in the year 1995, although it followed the rising trend and reached its peak in 1999 accounted as 90 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
Billion
 minutes form the graph went down slightly
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 by 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
 minutes and recorded as 70 in 2002.

Probing further
, domestic and foreign mobiles including all call had similar development from the year 1995 to 2002, while there was a difference of nearly
 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billion
initially
, the figure of national and international line went up gradually
, nevertheless
 the calls from mobile had risen up rapidly
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 the variance among both the line This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to 50 million units in the year 2002. 