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how an electricity generator machine functions using wave energy

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The diagram illustrates how an electricity generator machine functions using wave energy. The wave-energy machine is made of two main chambers and a turbine letting air +ow along the machine. Depending on the water levels and waves size, the amount and cost of extracted energy will differ. Firstly, some amount of water is directed into wave-energy machine cause the air +ows in the chambers. The +ow of air rotates turbine and consequently intensi*es the +owing of air going out of chambers. Secondly, air +ow can be got in the machine from outside and helps the machine generate electricity. It can be noted that locations of installing the wave-energy machine matters and lead to different output voltage. Locating machines on shallow water levels are less costly and produces low voltage output due to small waves involved with the machine. On contrast, if machines are mounted on a deep water levels, high output voltage will be attained despite the high expenses.
The diagram illustrates how an electricity generator
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machine
functions using

wave energy.

The wave-energy
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machine
is made
of two main chambers and a turbine letting

air +ow along the
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machine
. Depending on the
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water
levels and waves size, the

amount and cost of extracted energy will differ.
Firstly
,
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some
amount of
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water
is directed
into wave-energy
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machine
cause the
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air
+
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ows
in the chambers. The

+ow of
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air
rotates turbine and
consequently
intens
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i*e
s the +owing of
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air
going

out of chambers.
Secondly
,
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air
+ow can be
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got
in the
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machine
from outside and

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helps
the
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machine
generate electricity.

It can
be noted
that locations of installing the wave-energy
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machine
matters

and lead to
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different
output voltage. Locating
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machines
on shallow
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water
levels

are less costly and produces low voltage output due to
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small
waves involved

with the
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machine
. On contrast, if
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machines
are mounted
on a deep
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water
levels,

high output voltage will
be attained
despite the high expenses.
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IELTS academic how an electricity generator machine functions using wave energy

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4 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
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