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The table compares information about the jobholder of three separate age groups in various sectors. Overall, most of the jobholders prefer to do work in manufacturing, other and local government sectors. However, in each group similar number of workers do work at 3 different sectors while the least number number of employees like to do work at law and accountancy sectors. in terms of manufacturing sector, the highest number of workers who from every group, 12, 15 and 23 respectively. In the sector of local government, the highest number of workers at 40-65 ege group whereas least at 18-25 age group. In other sector, although most of the jobholders from 18-25 age group, the lowest from 40-65 age group. On the other hand, the number of workers from 3 age group are similar at agriculture whereas health and education sector are same. The least number of jobholders in law and accountancy among the table.

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