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The two charts compare people’s choice of transportation to get to the university between 2004 and 2009.

The two charts compare people’s choice of transportation to get to the university between 2004 and 2009. Wg8B0

The two charts compare people’s choice of transportation to get to the university between 2004 and 2009. Overall, we can see clearly that bus and car were the most favorable mean of transport in both two researched years, while train was the least chosen one. According to the given data, in 2004, the percentage of people preferring to travel by car accounted for slightly more than 50%. The second large trend was bus user, at 33%, which was noticeably much higher than the proportion of cyclist, at about 9%. The percentage of people deciding to go to the university by train and on foot was dramatically small, at 3% and 4% respectively. The 2009 pie witnessed radical change, which was bus becoming the most chosen transportation with 46%. The proportion of car commuter reduced by almost half, at 28%, while the amount of biker increased by 7%. The percentage of foot passenger and rail user also experienced modest growth, at 6% and 4% of each.

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people
’s choice of transportation to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to the university between 2004 and 2009.

Overall
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
clearly
 that bus and car were the most favorable mean of transport in both two researched years, while train was the least chosen one.

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given
 data, in 2004, the percentage of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 preferring to travel by car accounted for slightly
 more than 50%. The second large trend was bus user, at 33%, which was noticeably
 much higher than the proportion of cyclist, at about 9%. The percentage of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 deciding to go to the university by train and on foot was dramatically
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, at 3% and 4% respectively
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 2009 pie witnessed radical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
, which was bus becoming the most chosen transportation with 46%. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 proportion of car commuter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 by almost half, at 28%, while the amount of biker increased by 7%. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 percentage of foot passenger and rail user also
 experienced modest growth, at 6% and 4% of each. 