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the graph gives information about age of the population in iceland

the graph gives information about age of the population in iceland jD8PN

The given bar chart illustrates the information in terms of percentage about different age group of people living in Iceland from 1990 to 2020. To begin with, the maximum proportion was observed in 25 - 54 years between 1990 and 2010 and in final year it reached at its peak at 50%. The data remained constant among 65 years and over with the value of 15%. Movingfurther, the population in age of 55 -64 years remained low in comparison with others at 10%-15%. Between 1990 - 2020, there was no significant changes were seen in 0-14 years in Iceland, after that, it started to decline in the following years. overall, highest ratio was occupied by the age group og 15-54 year and least by 55-64 years. The age group of 0-14 years stood double as to compared to 55-64 years populace.

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