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The chart shows the global spending and world population along with the resources consumption. Write a report for a university lecture making comparisons relevant and reporting the main features.

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Here, the three different pie chartsdetails that the world spending, worldpopulation and the consumption of resources. The data is present in percentage. Overall, the highest population in world has Asia (57%). USA and Europe also haveconsumption of resources is more (60%). A glance at the first pie chart revelesthat people spend most of their incomeon other items at 40% then food at 24%. Tarnsport and housing are the almostSame near by 15% respectively 12% andMoreover, people spend less oftheir money on clothing 6%. Further analysis of second pie chartdemostrate that the maximum populationLiven in Asia (57%). Europe and Americaspopulation similar (each 14%) while 10%of people live in Africa and 5% ofpeople live in other countries. → Lastly, the third piechart illustratethat USA and Europe consume a huge resources 60% compare to other nations.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the global spending and world population along with the resources consumption. Write a report for a university lecture making comparisons relevant and reporting the main features.

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