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The process diagram illustrates the stages involved in creating images using digital technology

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The process diagram illustrates the stages involved in creating images using digital technology. These stages are arranged in anteroposterior order. Overall, it is apparent to realize that there are three main stages in the manufacturing process, beginning with capturing the images and finishing with printing the edited images. In particular, each stage is undertaken by a specialized type of technological equipment. The first stage in the process is to capture photos. The photos are taken with a digital camera with a built-in smart card. The card has the function of storing captured images. After that, these images are transferred to other technological equipment - a computer. In this second step, the computer is used to edit the images including cutting, enhancing, and formatting. The pictures stored on the computer can be emailed or stored on a compact disc (CD). In the final stage, edited photos are printed by using printers. The printing process begins with feeding photo papers into the printer. After undergoing this process, the final products are two different types of printed photos, namely color photos, or black and white photos.
The
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process
diagram illustrates the
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stages
involved in creating
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images
using digital technology. These
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stages
are arranged
in
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anteroposterior
order.

Overall
, it is apparent to realize that there are three main
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stages
in the manufacturing
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process
, beginning with capturing the
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images
and finishing with printing the edited
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images
.
In particular
, each
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stage
is undertaken by a specialized type of technological equipment.

The
first
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stage
in the
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process
is to capture
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photos
. The
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photos
are taken
with a digital camera with a built-in smart card.
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The
card has the function of storing captured
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images
. After that, these
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images
are transferred
to other technological equipment
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-
a computer. In this second step, the computer is
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used
to edit the
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images
including cutting, enhancing, and formatting. The pictures stored on the computer can
be emailed
or stored on a
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compact disc
(CD).

In the final
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stage
, edited
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photos
are printed
by using printers. The printing
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process
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begins
with feeding
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photo
papers into the printer. After undergoing this
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process
, the final products are two
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different
types of printed
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photos
,
namely
color
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photos
, or black and white
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photos
.
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IELTS academic The process diagram illustrates the stages involved in creating images using digital technology

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183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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