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The two bar charts provide information about the rate of export from Vietnam to the US and from the US to Vietnam. Overall, the highest export rate from Vietnam to the US is coffee whereas raito of garments and others are the lowest rate of export goods. In addition to, aircraft parts make up the highest rate in percante of export from the US to Vietnam, while percentage of cars is the lowest rate export. In the first pie chart, the ratio of coffee export makes up the highest rate among other goods, percentage of coffee export is just under 25%. Fruit and vegetables percentage are coming after coffee rate in export Vietnam to the US and their rate at 16%. Seafood and rice's rates are similiarly, 4, 4% and 4, 3% respectively. The lowest percentages of exports from Vietnam to the US are garments and other which percentages at 2%. Second pie chart shows that the highest rate of imports from Vietnam to the US is aircraft parts, which percenrage is just above 70%. Other goods' percentage is 35% which ratio is highest second export goods.
The two bar charts provide information about the
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of
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export
from Vietnam to the US and from the US to Vietnam.

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, the highest
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export
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rate
from Vietnam to the US is
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coffee
whereas
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raito
of garments
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and others
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rate
of
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export
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goods
.
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to, aircraft parts
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make
up the highest
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rate
in
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percante
of
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export
from the US to Vietnam, while
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percentage
of cars is the lowest
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rate
export.

In the
first
pie chart, the ratio of
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coffee
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export
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makes
up the highest
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rate
among
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other
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goods
,
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percentage
of
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coffee
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export
is
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just
under 25%. Fruit and vegetables
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percentage
are coming after
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coffee
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rate
in
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export
Vietnam to the US and their
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at 16%. Seafood and rice's
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rates
are
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similiarly
, 4, 4% and 4, 3%
respectively
. The lowest
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percentages
of
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exports
from Vietnam to the US are garments and
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other
which
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percentages
at 2%.

Second pie chart
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that the highest
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rate
of imports from Vietnam to the US is aircraft parts, which
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percenrage
is
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just
above 70%.
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Other
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goods
'
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percentage
is 35% which ratio is
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highest
second
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export
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goods
.
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