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he bar chart illustrates the percentage of the population in cities and regional areas of Australia according to their annual income.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the population in cities and regional areas of Australia according to their annual income. Overall, it can be seen that people living in cities earn a higher average income than regional centres. In both cities and regional centres, the majority of the population are lower middle or middle income earners, which means they have a yearly income of $40, 000-$70, 000 and $70, 000-$120, 000 respectively. However, in cities the largest of these two groups is the middle income earners, at 35%, while in regional centres the largest group is lower middle at around 34%. Another similarity between cities and regional areas is that highest and lowest income earners make up the two smallest population groups. Their yearly income is under $40, 000 (low), and over $120, 000 (high). However, in cities the low income group makes up only about 13% of the population, which is about 10% less than regional areas. The high income group also differs between the two areas, and is 5% greater in cities
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population
in
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cities
and regional

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areas
of Australia according to their annual
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income
.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that

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people
living in
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cities
earn a higher average
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income
than
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regional
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centres
.

In both
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cities
and
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regional
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centres
, the majority of the
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population
are lower

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middle
or middle
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income
earners, which means they have a yearly
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income
of

$40, 000-$70, 000 and $70, 000-$120, 000
respectively
.
However
, in
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cities
the

largest of these two
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groups
is the middle
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income
earners, at 35%, while in

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regional
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centres
the largest
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group
is lower middle at around 34%.

Another similarity between
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cities
and
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regional
areas is that highest and lowest

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income
earners
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make
up the two smallest
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population
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groups
. Their
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yearly


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income
is under $40, 000 (low), and over $120, 000 (high).
However
, in cities

the low
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income
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group
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makes
up
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only
about 13% of the
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population
, which is

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about
10% less than
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regional
areas. The high
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income
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group
also
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differs


between the two areas, and is 5% greater in
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cities
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IELTS academic he bar chart illustrates the percentage of the population in cities and regional areas of Australia according to their annual income.

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