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The two before-and-after maps demonstrates fundamentally changes in Liverpool John Moores University between 2010 to 2016.

The two before-and-after maps demonstrates fundamentally changes in Liverpool John Moores University between 2010 to 2016. DlkWW

The two before-and-after maps demonstrates fundamentally changes in Liverpool John Moores University between 2010 to 2016. Overall, various changes have accured over the years. Moreover, the library and admin buildings are still at their initial places. All biology, chimestry, and physics buildings in the north were replaced with a fresh building as the science faculty. The library was equiped with an IT center, also. Furthermore, the two car parks in the east and south-west were removed. Instead, there is a bus station as a new transportation system. The lecture theater has been constructed in the middle of the science department and admin building. Besides, a café as a new case is opposite the newly built lecture theater on the left. Nevertheless, for all these dramatic changes, considering the footbaths was necessary instead of internal road in the university. Overall, several significant changes such as recreational places and public vehicle, has developed the university as a comfortable inviroment for students.

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