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the total of passenger who using airline transport to travel

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The bar chart illustrates the total of passenger who using airline transport to travel. The data is measured into three years 2014, 2024 and 2034. Overall, the trend of each countries is different but they have a common point we can see clearly is the train is upward in each year. In the year 2014, Canada and the USA have the same amount of passenger and they both the highest in the list of countries, follow by Brazil. As expected, in 2024, the first place will be take by the USA and leave Canada behind. In the year 2034, the airline passenger of each countries will increase rapidly except for the UK. Like other years, the last three place still belong to three countries: the UK, Mexico and France. In summary, the data in each countries and each year is not the same but as the prediction, these will increase.

The bar chart illustrates the total of passenger who using airline transport to travel. The data is measured
 into three years 2014, 2024 and 2034.

Overall
, the trend of each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "country"?country
countries
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they have a common point we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
clearly
 is the train is upward in each year.

In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2014, Canada and the USA have the same amount of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).passenger, and
passenger and
 they both the highest in the list of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, follow by Brazil. As This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
, in 2024, the first
 place will be Consider using a past participle here: "taken".taken
take
 by the USA and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 Canada behind. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2034, the airline passenger of each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "country"?country
countries
 will increase rapidly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the UK. Like other years, the last three place still
 belong to three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
: the UK, Mexico and France.

In summary, the data in each The noun should be probably in the singular form: "country"?country
countries
 and each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 is not the same This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as the prediction, these will increase. 