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The flow char shows how sweaters are manufactured.

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The diagram demonstrates clearly the production process of sweaters. There are sixteen stages to make a sweater and consist totally 4 inspections. Firstly, the factory collects the yarn then sends it to the distribution area. At this stage, labours will wind and distribute it to the knitting stages. Here, The knitting of sweater panels is started and these panels would be inspected online. Thereafter, these panels will be linked and inspected again. After that, the Yarn will be trimmed then moved on to the check and mend stage. Here, If any problem with the panels is found, it will be sent back to the distribution section. or else the panels will be sent to attach the button. After that, workers will wash, label, and iron these sweaters. Then, it will be inspected again by the factory quality team to fold and package. Finally, They will check the final products again to deliver them to the consumers.
The diagram demonstrates
clearly
the production process of sweaters.

There are sixteen
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stages
to
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make
a sweater and consist
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4 inspections.
Firstly
, the factory collects the yarn then
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sends
it to the distribution area. At this
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stage
,
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labours
will wind and distribute it to the knitting
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stages
. Here, The knitting of sweater
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panels
is
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started
and these
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panels
would
be inspected
online. Thereafter, these
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panels
will
be linked
and inspected again. After that, the Yarn will
be trimmed
then
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moved
on to the
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check
and mend
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stage
. Here, If any problem with the
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panels
is found
, it will be
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sent
back to the distribution section.
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else the
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panels
will be
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sent
to attach the button. After that, workers will wash, label, and iron these sweaters. Then, it will
be inspected
again by the factory quality team to fold and package.
Finally
, They will
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check
the final products again to deliver them to the consumers.
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