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Graph of explanation extinction

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The line graph provides information on the status of species extinctions that is taken from tropical forests during ten decades. ( 2000-2100 ) Whereas, the pie chart illustrates the threats that can play a major role in the extinction of plant life. Firstly, as we can estimate, there were less than 5, 000 extinct species in the first year of the line graph. All of a sudden, this figure is predicted an abrupt increase more than 3 times that of the previous forty-year. Therefore, a peak will be achieved in 2060. (According to almost fifty thousand species extinct in this decade). As we reach the peak of species extinction, The reserve condition will occur and the number of extensions will experience a dramatic decrease between 2080 and 2010. As has been shown, There are many features as a warning for the survival of fauna and flora, which in this pie chart is divided into two integral resources: human impacts and natural events. furthermore, each of them is divided into several sub-parts. Since about three-quarters of the chart is devoted to the effects of activities performed by humans And only a quarter of it belongs to natural disasters and other natural events. Thus, natural events have a much smaller effect on plant life. such as storm surge, flooding, extreme winds, tornadoes, and lighting, account for only seven percent and other natural events account for 11. 7 % of extinctions. On the other hand, Agriculture and harvest with 18. 7% and 14. 4% have the most impact among other human activities and are two serious threats compared to other factors such as development, logging, livestock, disturbance, invasive species, plantations, and other human impacts.

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 of plant life.

Firstly
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 year of the line graph.

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, The reserve condition will occur and the number of extensions will experience a dramatic decrease between 2080 and 2010.

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