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The top diagram presents the current modern-day view of the islip city center, and directly below the subsequent future proposal of growth and expansion.

The top diagram presents the current modern-day view of the islip city center, and directly below the subsequent future proposal of growth and expansion. This report will highlight the similarities and differences. Past and present common elements albeit in different measure, include housing, shops, a school and a park. Noticeable newly planned changes include a shopping center, carriageway, and bus station. The current living quarters sit immediately north and south of the park; however the future master-plan incorporates four sets of housing; south west of the shops, adjacent to the park, and right of the school below the carriageway. Not only with future housing alter, but also the presently situated park will shrink to approximately by half, and the new center will only have shops to the south of the main road. Although the school will become slightly extensive the location will remain the same. In the coming years, new additions will include a dual carriageway constructed all around the town center will one entrance/exit feeding directly into the new housing located at north east of the city. Another development proposal highlights a brand new bus station and sopping center located in the northwest corner above the pedestrian sidewalk, but below the carriageway. On a final note designers will implement elimination of the upper row of the shops and replace them with car park that is between shopping center and new housing.

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current
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islip
 city center, and directly
 below the subsequent future proposal of growth and expansion. This report will highlight the similarities and differences.

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different
 measure, include housing, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
, a school and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Noticeable newly
 planned This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 include a shopping center, carriageway, and bus station.

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current
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park
; however
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south west
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
, adjacent to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, and right of the school below the carriageway. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
also
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park
 will shrink to approximately by half, and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 center will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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shops
 to the south of the main road. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 the school will become slightly
 extensive the location will remain the same.

In the coming years, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 additions will include a dual carriageway constructed all around the town center will one entrance/exit feeding directly
 into the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 housing located at This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 of the city. Another development proposal highlights a brand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 bus station and sopping center located in the northwest corner above the pedestrian sidewalk, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 below the carriageway. On a final note designers will implement elimination of the upper row of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 and replace them with car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
that is
 between shopping center and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 housing. 