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The three pie charts below show the coffee production and consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.

The three pie charts below show the coffee production and consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world. VB6BQ
The given three pie charts illustrates the percentage of coffee production and consumption and also give the information about profit distribution in various sectors. Overall, South Africa shared the highest percentage of coffee production. Delivery sector earns more profits than other sectors. Morever, Japan shared the least number of coffee consumption. From the first pie chart it is clear that South Africa produces the maximum coffee which is 44% and Indonesia's production is half of that while Japan and Vietnam stand at 18% and 16% of coffee production, respectively. The second pie chart reveals the maximum consumption of coffee is in Europe and the second highest consumption in the USA. Japan consumes only 8% of the coffee. The rest of the world consumes 12% of the coffee. The third pie chart illustrates the profit distribution in coffee. Half of the total profit is earned by delivery sector, while the retailers earn almost a quarter of the profits. A tenth of the profit go to exporters and remaining 15% profits are earned by producers.
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illustrates the percentage of
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coffee
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production
and consumption and
also
give the information about
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distribution in various sectors.

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production
. Delivery sector earns more
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profits
than other sectors.
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Morever
, Japan shared the least number of
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coffee
consumption.

From the
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it is
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that South Africa produces the maximum
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which is 44% and Indonesia's
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production
is half of that while Japan and Vietnam stand at 18% and 16% of
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coffee
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production
,
respectively
.

The second
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reveals the maximum consumption of
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is in Europe and the second highest consumption in the USA. Japan consumes
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8% of the
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coffee
. The rest of the world consumes 12% of the coffee.

The third
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illustrates the
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profit
distribution in
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coffee
. Half of the total
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profit
is earned
by delivery sector, while the retailers earn almost a quarter of the
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profits
. A tenth of the
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profit
go to exporters and remaining 15%
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profits
are earned
by producers.
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IELTS academic The three pie charts below show the coffee production and consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.

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