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Tourists Visiting a Caribbean Island

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The given line graphs depicts information about how many tourist visited a Caribbean island over the period of 2010 to 2017. Looking from overall perspective, it is apparent that, the total number of tourist visiting Caribbean island steadily increased while the figures for visitors staying on cruise ship and island flactuated during the time phase. To begin with, in 2010, the quantity of tourist stayed on cruise ship stood on the 0. 25 millions whereas it was 3 time less than the visitors who stayed on island which commencing at 0. 75. However between 2010 and 2011 the trend for traveler who choose to rest on cruise ship rose to half millions and following year (in 2012) it dropped the point where it started. From that year, the line climped permenantly and reached to exactly 2 millions visitors in 2017. Moving on with the tourists stayed island, the tendency started to growth within the the 2011 and 2013 and untill 2015 it ramained constant. After that year, it fall to 1. 25 millions of visitors and at the end of period it move upward to 1. 5 millions.
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tourist
visited a Caribbean
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island
over the period of 2010 to 2017.

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overall
perspective, it is apparent that, the total number of
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tourist
visiting Caribbean
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island
steadily
increased while the figures for
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visitors
staying on cruise ship and
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island
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flactuated
during the time phase.

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stayed on cruise ship stood on the 0. 25
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millions
whereas it was 3 time less than the
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visitors
who stayed on
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island
which commencing at 0. 75.
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However
between 2010 and 2011 the trend for traveler who choose to rest on cruise ship rose to half
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millions
and following year (in 2012) it dropped the point where it
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started
. From that year, the line
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permenantly
and reached to exactly 2
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millions
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visitors
in 2017. Moving on with the
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tourists
stayed
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island
, the tendency
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2011 and 2013 and
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IELTS academic Tourists Visiting a Caribbean Island

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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