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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. oo09

The pie charts illustrates the noticeable percentages of costs in each year for specific British school in two decades from 1981 to 2001. The instructors earnings significantly rose in the first decade, but slightly fell in the second decade. However, the percentages of insurance increased four times in this period of time. Both teachers incomes and insurance enjoyed considerable and slight growth from 40 percent to 50 percent and two percent and three percent respectively. On the other hand other employers fee and furniture and equipment significantly fell with 28 percent, 15 percent to 22 percent and five percent in order. In 2001, instructors salaries slightly decreased from 50 percent to 45 percent from last ten years. While, resources costs considerably fell from 20 percent to less than ten percent.

The pie charts illustrates the noticeable percentages of costs in each year for specific British school in two decades from 1981 to 2001. The instructors earnings significantly
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but
slightly
 fell in the second decade. However
, the percentages of insurance increased four times in this period of time. Both teachers incomes and insurance enjoyed considerable and slight growth from 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
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respectively
. On the other hand
 other employers fee and furniture and equipment significantly
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 in order. In 2001, instructors salaries slightly
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 from last ten years. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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, resources costs considerably
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