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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. OpeG
The graph gives information about how many books people read in Burnaby Public Library between 4 years period from 2011 to 2014 and catagorized it with gender for men and women. Overall, as can be seen from the graph, there was a strong upward trend in books was read by men. Howevere, woman read more books than man by 2013, their reading fell down the level of men in 2014. The number of book read y men increase steadily between 2011 and 2012. Consequenly there are noticible rose in the count of book which is equal to 1400 in 2014. For beging point for women are higher than men, but their pattern are slightly different from male ones. Between 2011 and 2012, there was a increase of 4000 to 8000 and gradual rise to 1000 books in 2013. Also in 2013 there was a intersetion in numbers for book in both sex. However in 2014, female numbers decrease up to 8000.
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by 2013, their reading fell down the level of
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The number of
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increase of 4000 to 8000 and gradual rise to 1000
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

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