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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. eakJ
The free pie charts presents the changes in the yearly spending by a particular schools in the UK in three different period of times with a difference in 10 years. In general from the stat it can inferred that, teacher salaries occupied the highest rate in all three periods, whereas insurance had the lowest percentage. In 1981 «resources e. g. books» and «furniture and equipment» had the same percentage (15%), while «other workers salaries» had about twice as much furniture and equipment (28%). «Insurance» occupied only 2%, and it is the lowest rate compared to other two given period of time. As for 1991 percentage of teachers’ salaries remained at the highest rate with increasing by 10% with comparison to 1981, while «furniture and equipment» was reduced threefold and was only 5 percent. As concerns «other workers salaries», percentage decreased by only 6% Pie chart concerning total school spending in 2001, demonstrate that teacher salaries had 45% while other workers salaries had three times less (15%). Furthermore «insurance» and «resources e. g books» had approximately the same percentage with the difference in 1% (8%), (9%). «Furniture and equipment» occupied the the highest rate compared to other two period of time.
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of times with a difference in 10 years.

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that, teacher
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occupied the highest
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in all three
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, whereas insurance had the lowest percentage.

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equipment»
had the same
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(15%), while
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«other
workers
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had about twice as much
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(28%). «Insurance» occupied
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As for 1991
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of teachers’
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with increasing by 10% with comparison to 1981, while
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,
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Pie chart concerning total school spending in 2001, demonstrate that teacher
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had 45% while
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had three times less (15%).
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IELTS academic The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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