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The diagram gives information about the process of producing of orange juice.

The diagram gives information about the process of producing of orange juice. KarL
The diagram gives information about the process of producing of orange juice. As it can be seen, after certain stage it divade two parts. First of all, oranges are picked and loaded onto tracks, delivered to a factory for producing. After all of them are washed, the juice is extracted from the oringes by a machine and the solid waste including their peels and seeds are collected for feeding animals. At this point, juice can either be packaged and sent to supermarkets, or carried to another factory for evaporation process. Oranges transfer to the factory by virtue of refrigerator truck, they commence to be evaporated by machines to lose the water they contain. After concentrating, they are canned and delivered to the warehouse. Following this cans are carried to factory in order to add water in cans, consequently as a consequence, process is finished, they are packed and sent to shops.
The diagram gives information about the process of producing of orange juice. As it
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can
be
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seen
, after certain stage it
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divade
two parts.

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First of all
, oranges
are picked
and loaded onto
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tracks
, delivered to a
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factory
for producing.
After all
of them
are washed
, the juice
is extracted
from the
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oringes
by a machine and the solid waste including their peels and seeds
are collected
for feeding animals. At this point, juice
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can
either
be packaged
and
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sent
to supermarkets, or carried to another
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factory
for evaporation process.

Oranges transfer to the
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factory
by virtue of refrigerator truck, they commence to
be evaporated
by machines to lose the water they contain. After concentrating, they
are canned
and delivered to the warehouse. Following
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this
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cans
are carried
to
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factory
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
water in
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cans
,
consequently
as a consequence, process
is finished
, they
are packed
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to shops.
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IELTS academic The diagram gives information about the process of producing of orange juice.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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