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The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. lDb1

The illustration demonstrates the future method of producing energy at home. Overall, what stands out from the diagram is that there are consist six steps, beginning with compost ferments methane gas and ending up with electrical energy store store in battery. The equipment consists of a large tank, boxes and pipes that would be able to fit into a garage-sized room. First of all, steel tank filled with compost which contains leaves, food, scraps etc and water for compost ferments methane gas, after that gas out and store into a methane storage tank, which connected to a compressor. In the next step, by compressor methane gas reach the combustion engine and turn into mechanical energy. Then mechanical energy transform into electrical energy with the help of a generator; finally, electrical energy is stored in a battery for home use.

The illustration demonstrates the future method of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 at home.

Overall
, what stands out from the diagram is that there are consist six steps, beginning with compost ferments methane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 and ending up with electrical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
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store store
 in battery. The equipment consists of a large tank, boxes and pipes that would be able to fit into a garage-sized room.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, steel tank filled with compost which contains This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
, food, scraps etc and water for compost ferments methane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
, after that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 out and store into a methane storage tank, which connected to a compressor. In the next
 step, by compressor methane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 reach the combustion engine and turn into mechanical energy.

Then mechanical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 transform into electrical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of a generator; finally
, electrical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
is stored
 in a battery for home This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. 