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The plans below a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The plans below a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today kaPO

The plans of public park when it first opened in the 1920 and after reconstruction the same park in the current days. Overall, it can be easily obvious that the locations some features have been changed and some extra entertaining facilities have been constructed in comparison between two maps. To start with, stage for musicians has been built instead of it. The locations of seats where situated in the edge of the park, after construction all seats are situated in the middle of the Grance Park. In comparison, there were three gardens in 1920 but in current days this number is decreased to 1 and the number of gardens are formed 2. Afterwards, in current days some extra features namely Water feature, Amphitheatre for concerts and underground car park. Likewise, in 1920 Pond for pluter points situated in the Eastern-Nort, however, today in this place locate children's play area. In comparison, there were not cafe 1920 but today there is a cafe which situated in the north of the park.

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park
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 opened in the 1920 and after reconstruction the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
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current
 days. Overall
, it can be easily
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some
 features have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra entertaining facilities have been constructed
in comparison
 between two maps.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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instead
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situated
 in the edge of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, after construction all seats are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacedparkedplanted
situated
 in the middle of the Possible spelling mistake found.FranceGraceTranceGlanceGrangePrance
Grance
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Park
. In comparison
, there were three gardens in 1920 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 days this number is decreased
 to 1 and the number of gardens are formed
 2.

Afterwards, in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra features namely
 Water feature, Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
 for concerts and underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Likewise
, in 1920 Pond for Possible spelling mistake found.pouter
pluter
 points You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacedparkedplanted
situated
 in the Possible spelling mistake found.Easternmost
Eastern-Nort
, however
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 in this place locate children's play area. In comparison
, there were not 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
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but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 there is a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacedparkedplanted
situated
 in the north of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. 