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The three pie charts below give information about commuters travelled to london in 1990,2000,2010

The three pie charts below give information about commuters travelled to london in 1990, 2000, 2010 GwB5m
The rendered circular chart elucidates the information about passengers who commuted in london for work in 3 decades. Overall, it is crystal clear that maximum number of people travel by underground railway and minimum travel by motor cycle. In 1990, it can seen that commuters travelled by under railway was 38 percent but after two decades it was dwindled and shown 34 percent in 2010. The percentage of car and train war almost a quater in 1990 yet in 2000 and 2010 percentage of travellers was remained same. Moving further, the travling by motorcycle was 4 percent in 1990 and it was slightly increased by 1 percent after 20 years. The number of passengers travelled by walking for work was shown fluctuations which was noted to 8 percent, 10 percent, 9 percent, respectively. At the end, bycycle travellers were continuasly escalated in 3 decades.
The rendered circular chart elucidates the information about passengers who commuted in
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london
for work in 3 decades.

Overall
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that maximum number of
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travel by underground railway and minimum travel by motor cycle.

In 1990, it can
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that commuters travelled by under railway was 38
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after two decades it
was dwindled
and shown 34
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in 2010. The percentage of car and train war almost a
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quater
in 1990
yet
in 2000 and 2010 percentage of
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travellers
was remained
same.

Moving
further
, the
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travling
by motorcycle was 4
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percent
in 1990 and it was
slightly
increased by 1
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percent
after 20 years. The number of passengers travelled by walking for work
was shown
fluctuations which
was noted
to 8
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percent
, 10
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percent
, 9
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,
respectively
. At the
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,
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bycycle
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were
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IELTS academic The three pie charts below give information about commuters travelled to london in 1990, 2000, 2010

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