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The chart below give information about Istanbul Promo plus sales in 2007.

The chart below give information about Istanbul Promo plus sales in 2007. Q8Ybw
The chart represents how the sales of Istanbul Promo plus fluctuated over a period of 12 months. Overall, promo plus in Istanbul relatively unchanged in 2007 as January and December sales were nearly equal. As is observed, starting at 200 million turkish lira in January the turn over increased slightly to roughly 225 million in the March. However, this upward trend was broken and the sales significantly declined to just over 100 million in July. August sales showed a dramatic rise back to January level, nevertheless they reduced again in September to the sam level as they were in two months ago. The turn over went up progressively by approximately 50 million and then this figure maintained relatively at 200 million over the last two months of 2007.
The chart represents how the
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of Istanbul Promo plus fluctuated
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a period of 12 months.
Overall
, promo plus in Istanbul
relatively
unchanged in 2007 as January and December
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were
nearly
equal. As
is observed
, starting at 200
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turkish
lira in January the turn
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increased
slightly
to roughly 225
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million
in the March.
However
, this upward trend
was broken
and the
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significantly
declined to
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100
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in July. August
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a dramatic rise back to January level,
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they
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reduced
again in September to the
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level as they were in two months ago. The turn
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went up
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and then this figure maintained
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at 200
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the last two months of 2007.
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