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The Three Pie Charts Before Dhow The Changes in Annual spending by a particular UK School in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

These charts demonstrate the outlay of UK school budgets in two decades. In general, it is clear if the most of sectors fluctuate in each period meanwhile two other features have two different pattern. At first, the teacher salaries still spent the most of total spendings of the budget in each period with no more less than 40% and soar to the highest numbers in 1991 with 50%. In the other hand insurance expand steadily which went from 2% in 1981 to 3% in 1991 and rose up to 8% in 2001. Other facts is the expenditure for other workers salaries decrease constantly which off rom 28% in 1981 to 22% in 1991 and finish in 15% in 2001. At second, the pie charts did not show an interesting information since it two others variable demonstrate unstable pattern however despite this fact, each of category have various motif. For example the resources have change moderately in contrast the precentage for furniture and equipment reshape significantly in each time.
These charts demonstrate the outlay of UK school budgets in two decades.
In general
, it is
clear
if the most of sectors fluctuate in each period meanwhile two
other
features have two
different
pattern.

At
first
, the teacher salaries
still
spent the most of total spendings of the budget in each period with no more less than 40% and soar to the highest numbers in 1991 with 50%. In the
other
hand insurance expand
steadily
which went from 2% in 1981 to 3% in 1991 and rose up to 8% in 2001.
Other
facts is the expenditure for
other
workers salaries decrease
constantly
which off rom 28% in 1981 to 22% in 1991 and finish in 15% in 2001.

At second, the pie charts did not
show
an interesting information since it two others variable demonstrate unstable pattern
however
despite this fact, each of category have various motif.
For example
the resources have
change
moderately
in contrast
the precentage for furniture and equipment reshape
significantly
in each time.

IELTS academic The Three Pie Charts Before Dhow The Changes in Annual spending by a particular UK School in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
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