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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables above describe main features in temperature and hours of daylight in two English countries, London and Sydney during the same period of time. Overall, the ample significance is the difference between given information in both tables. First and foremost, values are constant each day in both cities, however, the comparasion of Sydney and London is enormous. In London, the avarage temperature is aproximetelly 7 degrees the whole day, in contrast, in Sydney it is around 23 degrees in december 2018. Futhermore, the sunrise in London is at 08: 05, while there is difference more than 2 hours in Sydney, where sunrise is much sooner, at 05: 45. Additionally, daylight in Australia is longer, because the sunset is at 20: 06. In comparasion, in UK, sunsets are at 16: 00, which is 4 hour scale in this countries. Last but not the least, in Sydney are more than 50% of daylight than in London.
The tables above
describe
main features in temperature and hours of daylight in two English countries, London and Sydney during the same period of time.

Overall
, the ample significance is the difference between
given
information in both tables.

First
and foremost, values are constant each day in both cities,
however
, the comparasion of Sydney and London is enormous. In London, the avarage temperature is
aproximetelly
7 degrees the whole day,
in contrast
, in Sydney it is around 23 degrees in december 2018.

Futhermore, the sunrise in London is at 08: 05, while there is difference more than 2 hours in Sydney, where sunrise is much sooner, at 05: 45.
Additionally
, daylight in Australia is longer,
because
the sunset is at 20: 06. In comparasion, in UK, sunsets are at 16: 00, which is 4 hour scale in this countries. Last
but
not the least, in Sydney are more than 50% of daylight than in London.

IELTS academic The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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