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The three maps illustrate the main changes in the town called Tarnagul in three years; 1900, 1950, and 2000.

The three maps illustrate the main changes in the town called Tarnagul in three years; 1900, 1950, and 2000. K3EAL
The three maps illustrate the main changes in the town called Tarnagul in three years; 1900, 1950, and 2000. Overall, it is evident that the town became more modernized and dense populated with tourist attractions. Firstly, the road running from west to east and river which situated in the west of the town were remained unchanged over a 100-year period. Similarly, town area still stood over these periods. By 1950, dairy in the northern-west of the town had been demolished to build lemons and grapefruit, and oranges to east of the river remained constant. In addition, Mandarins area to the east of the town area was replaced by extra oranges area, and town area was enlarged in size to purchase additional area to the west. Finally, the packing shelds was introduced in the east of the town. it had three various buildings, namely, local museum, craft market, and tourist shop. Between 1950 and 2000, town area was minimized again, nad all of oranges area were demolished, and park was added to the west of the southern oranges area. In terms of lemons and grapefruit, it was destroyed to transform to wildlife santuary to accomodate more animals. So, packing sheds was improved and it lost its tracks.
The three maps illustrate the main
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changes
in the
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town
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Tarnagul
in three years; 1900, 1950, and 2000.

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, it is evident that the
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town
became more modernized and dense populated with tourist attractions.

Firstly
, the road running from west to east and river which situated in the west of the
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town
were remained
unchanged over a 100-year period.
Similarly
,
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town
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area
still
stood over these periods.

By 1950, dairy in the northern-west of the
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town
had
been demolished
to build lemons and grapefruit, and oranges to east of the river remained constant.
In addition
, Mandarins
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area
to the east of the
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town
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area
was replaced
by extra
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oranges
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area
, and
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town
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area
was enlarged
in size to
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purchase
additional
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area
to the west.
Finally
, the packing
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shelds
was introduced
in the east of the
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.
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it
had three various buildings,
namely
, local museum, craft market, and tourist shop.

Between 1950 and 2000,
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town
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area
was minimized
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nad
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all of oranges
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area
were demolished
, and park was
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added
to the west of the southern
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oranges
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area
. In terms of lemons and grapefruit, it was
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destroyed
to transform to wildlife
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santuary
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accomodate
more animals.
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improved
and it lost its
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tracks
.
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IELTS academic The three maps illustrate the main changes in the town called Tarnagul in three years; 1900, 1950, and 2000.

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