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The diagram illustrates cycle of silkworm and the stages in the production of silk clothes In general, the process transformated cocoon to silk clothes The first there is cocoon experience 16 days become month. The month which lying on the leaf and lay eggs. During 10 days, it grow silkworm larva live on mulbery leaf. After, 4-6 weeks, larva was mature which producted silk thead, or called cocoon Cocoon is boil by water in the pot, unwind and roll silk about long 300-900m. Thereby cocoon weave removed silk. Take it dye with colors. Final they can product silk cloth
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cocoon to
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month which lying on the leaf and lay eggs. During 10 days, it
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silkworm larva
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leaf. After, 4-6 weeks, larva was mature which
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producted
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silk
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thead
, or called cocoon

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silk
about long 300
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-900m
. Thereby cocoon weave removed
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silk
. Take it dye with colors. Final they
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can product
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cloth
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates cycle of silkworm and the stages in

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  American English
3 paragraphs
98 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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