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The diagram below shows the working of the food cycle in our world

The diagram below shows the working of the food cycle in our world m8gp1

The picture illustrates information about how the food cycle working in nature. Overall, it can be seen that living things depend on other living things for food and a food chain is a natural order of what eats what. Looking at the first steps of the process, it is crystal clear that from the sun and soil the plants absorb the food which was decomposed and substances by trees. After that, the primary sources were small insects which were consumed the plants. As an example, a caterpillar, who eats the greenery and leaves. Next, the small insects are eaten by the second class which involved birds si the birds eat the caterpillar. Following the chain, the third is a fox eating the bird. On the other hand, when a fox dies its body were decomposed and the food cycle keeps the natural world in harmony Looking forward, a food chain begins with the sun's energy which received a grass growth. after, the greenery is consumed by zebra and finally, the small animals are eaten by a lion and the process begins with as a same in the world.

The picture illustrates information about how the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
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 cycle working in nature.

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 that living things depend on other living things for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
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 the birds eat the caterpillar. Following the chain, the third is a fox eating the bird. On the other hand
, when a fox This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passes away
dies
 its body were decomposed
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
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 the natural world in harmony

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