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The given diagrams show the changes in Grange park in 1920 and today .summarize the information and write the report.

The given diagrams show the changes in Grange park in 1920 and today. 9BEoX
The two maps comapre the information regarding public park named Grange park in two different years, 1920 and at present accordingly. Overall, Grange park which is located at Arnold Avenue shows major difference in infrastructure at centre of park which is replaced by Rose garden and Amphitheatre at present. In year 1920, the centre area was covered by stage for musicians and there was fountain at middle of Grange Park. There were two rose garden at North east side and north west of park. Main entrance is still located at the same place at the south side which is connected to Eldon street in both 1920 and today. Pond and glasshouse are mainly situated at the north east and south east side of the park respectively in past. Major replacement at current park are namely water feature, children's play area as well as Amphitheatre for concerts. Instead of three rose gardens there are only two rose garden situated at park today. The other additional spot is cafe which is located at North side of park. And underground car park is another highlighted spot.
The two maps
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comapre
the information regarding public
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park
named Grange
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park
in two
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different
years, 1920 and at present
accordingly
.

Overall
, Grange
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park
which
is located
at Arnold Avenue
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shows
major difference in infrastructure at
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centre
of
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park
which
is replaced
by
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Rose
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garden
and
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Amphitheatre
at present.

In year 1920, the
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centre
area
was covered
by stage for musicians and there was fountain at middle of Grange
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Park
. There were two
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rose
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garden
at
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North
east side and
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north west
of
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park
. Main entrance is
still
located at the same place at the south side which
is connected
to Eldon street in both 1920 and
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today
. Pond and glasshouse are
mainly
situated at the
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north east
and
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south east
side of the
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park
respectively
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in past
.

Major replacement at
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current
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park
are
namely
water feature, children's play area
as well
as
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Amphitheatre
for concerts.
Instead
of three
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rose
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gardens
there are
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only
two
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rose
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garden
situated at
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park
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today
. The other additional spot is
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cafe
which
is located
at
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North
side of
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park
. And underground car
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park
is another highlighted spot.

IELTS academic The given diagrams show the changes in Grange park in 1920 and today.

Academic
  American English
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183 words
6.0
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