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The task below show the number of travellers using three major airports in new york city between 1995 and 2000

The task below show the number of travellers using three major airports in new york city between 1995 and 2000 00k9

The rendered bar graph gives information about how many people visited New York city through three major airports, over a period of six years; from 1995 to 2000. Overall, it is explicated that throughout the period, there was a fluctuant trend in the number of passengers who travelled by John F. Kennedy, while the other two airports experienced an upward trend. Another striking point is that LaGuardia airport was most popular amongst tourists. It is evident that in the year 1995, the number of travellers at John F. Kennedy airport started from 26 millions and after experiencing some fluctuations in the meantime, it reached at 43 millions. With respect to LaGuardia airport, although it had approximately 35 million people initially, the figure inclined remarkably to 68 million at the end of the period. Furthermore, Newark airport started from the lowest point in 1995, at 16 millions. After this point, the trend increased significantly in the coming years and witnessed mounting shift by 25 millions. However, it remained stagnant for the next two years.

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airports
, over a period of six years; from 1995 to 2000.

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airports
 experienced an upward trend. Another striking point is that LaGuardia You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrunwayinstallationairfieldairstrip
airport
 was most popular amongst tourists.

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year
 1995, the number of Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
travellers
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airport
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started
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millions
 and after experiencing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations in the meantime, it reached at 43 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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. With respect to LaGuardia You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrunwayinstallationairfieldairstrip
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, although it had approximately 35 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
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people
initially
, the figure inclined remarkably
 to 68 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

Furthermore
, Newark You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrunwayinstallationairfieldairstrip
airport
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started
 from the lowest point in 1995, at 16 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
. After this point, the trend increased significantly
 in the coming years and witnessed mounting shift by 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
. However
, it remained stagnant for the next
 two years. 